Mission Three - Being In Love Is Twice As Hard part two

[cassie5squared]

This entry has been shifted to my new PPC journal c5s_ppc_agents. You can find the post here.

Comments

[dracorn-adagio.livejournal.com]

Ah, so that's what happened to get Cassie taken into custody. Poor Kelvin probably didn't need to see that on his first mission.

Elbereth? Seriously, Elbereth? Wow, that's bad. *shakes head*

[cassie5squared.livejournal.com]

Indeed. She really lost it there. And it must have been really bad to make an Elf throw up - they're pretty tough.

And yes, stealing the name of a Vala ranks pretty high on the killworthy charges meter.

[sedri.livejournal.com]

Ack. How dreadful. Elbereth/i>. *sigh*

Cheers on the violence, though. Ah, the squishy sound of Sue-blood...

[cassie5squared.livejournal.com]

Yes, Cassie appears to have enjoyed the violence. Kelvin didn't, though, poor lamb. He's only ninety-seven. hopefully his next mission will be less... messy.

...Actually, it probably won't.

[sedri.livejournal.com]

Ah, bring on the BLOOD!

(and sorry about the screwy html tag).

[cassie5squared.livejournal.com]

Kelvin: No, don't bring on the blood. Please. *looks ill*

Cassie: Blood? Where? *looks around curiously*

Nat: *glares* Now look what you did.

(No worries.)

[lady-rilwen.livejournal.com]

Well, that answers the question of what happened. The Sue seemed to deserve it, though.
Nice mission.

[cassie5squared.livejournal.com]

Oh, Cassie seemed to think she deserved it (while she was temporarily insane, anyway). The Flowers didn't see it that way, though. :(

And thank you.

[indemaat.livejournal.com]

Nice mission.

I liked the first half of it better than the second. I think there are two reasons for this. One is that in the second half there were more rather long excerpts of the badfic. I tend to glance over them if they are more than three lines long. Personally, I prefer to use the excerpts as punch lines (describe or paraphrase what happened and then one short quote to drive the point home).

The second reason is that I had no idea the Sue had aged thirteen years until she was charged. Well, I had figured out she had aged, after I first spend a rather long WTF moment of why is this Elf chatting up a five-year-old. A mention of how much time had progressed when the agents stepped into the scene at the top of part two would have been helpful.

Other than that, nice mission. Good agent interaction.

[cassie5squared.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. These are some really useful tips you've given me, and I'll do my best to remember them when it comes round to the next mission.

And I have to admit the agent interactions were probably the best bits to write. :D When you're giggling at a scene as you write it, you can't help but be inspired.

[indemaat.livejournal.com]

When you're giggling at a scene as you write it, you can't help but be inspired.

Very true. I love it when I'm writing a mission and keep sniggering and sometimes plain laughing out loud. Great missions those are.

Good luck on your next mission. Break a leg (you know whose, and accidentally, of course).

[magicbeliever.livejournal.com]

Woo-wee. Violent much. Definitely went bonkers there when dealing with the Sue.

[cassie5squared.livejournal.com]

*grins* I think she'll avoid that from now on, though. She wasn't too impressed with what she'd done when she calmed down, and the consequences, i.e the arrest in the middle of the Christmas party, shook her up quite a bit.

[hsavinien.livejournal.com]

Oh, dearie me... Er, well done, undue violence notwithstanding. I laughed at some of the typos in Kelvin's origin fic. When the orcs "sat upon" the fallen elves, for example...

Good agent interaction, definitely.

Agent Tath

[cassie5squared.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. Those typos made me laugh, too. Though desecrating your own fic to such an extent isn't nice.

And I hope to have my Agents interacting in similarly amusing ways in forthcoming missions.